Mechanics Of Society

[Mert Ahmet]

Technology is improving day by day. We are also affecting them. In the first place, technology is changing many things in our life. Generally, we can reach knowledge easily, so I think we start to be lazy. Everybody, everybody is using technology mostly mobile phones and computers. Actually, T don't think this is good. Society began to change the sense of humor, culture, tradition... I don't know where the youth is going. In addition to this, some youth are stuck in a rut, they have got no purpose, no idea about current, no culture about knowledge. I am pitying them. They think that only about facebook, twitter, or something like that. I don't know more. There is a mobile phone on their hands and they are writing some thing on internet each minute. I think teenegers shouldn't behave this way.
Mert Ahmet Altıparmak - 4/4/2012

It just my homework. Do you agree with me ?

 

[erenberk]

There are lots of mistakes, sorry bro

Technology has been improving day by day. Therefore, we are affected by this changing (by it). In the first place (First,), technology has changed many things in our life (lives). Generally, we can reach knowledge (get information) easily, so I think we start to be (become) lazy. Everybody is using (uses) mobile phones and computers. Actually, I don't think this is good. Society began to change the sense of humor, culture, tradition, etc. I don't know where the youth is going. In addition to this, some youth are stuck in a rut, they have got no purpose, no idea about current (? agenda), no culture about knowledge (knowledge of culture). I am pitying them. They only think about facebook, twitter, or something like that. I don't know more. There are mobile phones on their hands and they share some things on the internet at each minute. I think teenegers shouldn't behave this way.
Mert Ahmet Altıparmak - 4/4/2012

 

[Mert Ahmet]

that's normal because i wrote it 2 months ago. No problem